很多留學(xué)新生對(duì)于Essay寫作結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容不太了解,不知道怎么才能拿高分。接下來小編就給同學(xué)們示范Essay代寫開頭、內(nèi)容、及結(jié)尾怎么完成。
Essay代寫
A.開頭(主題句)–作者對(duì)主題的看法
每段都要有一個(gè)「主題句」,將你的「論點(diǎn)」和「主題」的關(guān)系建立起來。主題句陳述作者對(duì)主題的立場(chǎng)或看法。
譬如,我想寫關(guān)于「抽煙」,重點(diǎn)擺在「抽煙與費(fèi)用」的關(guān)系,看下面的主題句如何建立這兩者的關(guān)系:
Smoking can be an expensive habit.
這句中,主題是Smoking,「昂貴」(expensive)是我的看法(論點(diǎn)),有了主題句,讀者(尤其是西方讀者)就馬上可以意會(huì)到我這段的目的。(請(qǐng)注意,主題句的位置不是一定要在每段的第一句,但擺在第一句是一種不容易離題的寫法。)
B.內(nèi)容–解釋看法
如前面所提,作者必須提出適當(dāng)?shù)淖C據(jù)或作說明來支持自己的看法,因?yàn)?,讀者想知道「作者為什么這樣認(rèn)為」。延續(xù)「抽煙」這個(gè)題目,我必須在這段里「說清楚,講明白」為什么抽煙是昂貴的嗜好。最常用的兩個(gè)方法:
a.申論
方法一(邏輯推論):
Smoking is addicting,and as people become addicted,their spending on this habit is likely to increase.
或
Smoking can be an expensive habit because it is addicting.Addicted people tend to smoke more and,as a result,spend more on this habit.
(采用A=B,B=C,則A=C(主題句)的邏輯。其中,A–smoking,B–addiction,C–more spending=expensive)
方法二(具體的解釋):
Assuming the average price of a pack of cigarettes is 50 dollars,if people smoke a pack a day it will cost them 50 dollars a day,or 18,250 dollars a year.However,if they smoke two packs a day because of addiction,their annual smoking expenditures double,going up to a staggering amount of 36,500 dollars.
同樣用「煙癮」當(dāng)理由,但運(yùn)用數(shù)字的變化,突顯「昂貴」這個(gè)論點(diǎn)。
b.舉例
Take my cousin Tony for example.He smokes a pack of cigarettes a day,which costs fifty dollars,so he spends some fifteen hundred dollars on the habit every month.But to his surprise,there is another unexpected expense to cover other than the price of cigarettes.Because smoking often gives out smoke offensive to nonsmokers,Tony has to clean his clothes,his furniture,and his car more often to get rid of the odor than if he does not smoke.So at the end of every month,he finds himself spending an additional couple of thousand dollars on cleaning alone.
「舉例」是另一個(gè)使你的論點(diǎn)具說服力的方法,運(yùn)用實(shí)例,帶出費(fèi)用,增加信服力。
C.結(jié)尾–摘要本段重點(diǎn)
在充份解釋完我的論點(diǎn),我作個(gè)總結(jié):
For many smokers,50 dollars a day for cigarettes may be a small token,but the compounding effect of addiction would easily double that amount and cost them hugely in a year’s time,making smoking a costly habit.
(以「煙癮」當(dāng)理由的結(jié)尾)
或
As one can see,the price of cigarettes is not the only cost to smokers;the additional cleaning fee associated with smoking makes it an expensive habit to take on.
(以「不同費(fèi)用」當(dāng)理由的結(jié)尾)
這兩種結(jié)尾只說明一件事–抽煙是昂貴的,并未影射或強(qiáng)調(diào)「抽煙好或不好」,也沒有建議「癮君子要如何做」,因?yàn)檫@些都跟我的論點(diǎn)無關(guān)。
將以上各句串聯(lián)在一起,形成完整的一段如下:
范例1—以「煙癮」當(dāng)理由的寫法:
Smoking can be an expensive habit because of addiction.Addicted people tend to smoke more and,as a result,spend more on this habit.Assuming a pack of cigarettes costs 50 dollars,if people smoke a pack a day it will cost them 50 dollars a day,or 18,250 dollars a year.But if they smoke two packs a day—because of addiction,their yearly smoking expenses double easily,going up to a staggering amount of 36,500 dollars.For many smokers,50 dollars a day for cigarettes may be a small token,but the compounding effect of addiction could easily double that amount and cost them hugely in a year's time,making smoking a costly habit.
范例2—以「不同費(fèi)用」當(dāng)理由的寫法:
Smoking can be an expensive habit.Take my cousin Tony for example.He smokes a pack of cigarettes a day,which costs fifty dollars,so he spends some fifteen hundred dollars on the habit every month.But to his surprise,there is another unexpected expense to cover as a result of this habit.Because smoking cigarettes often gives out smoke offensive to nonsmokers,Tony has to clean his clothes,his furniture,and his car more often to get rid of the odor than if he does not smoke.So at the end of every month,he finds himself spending an additional couple of thousand dollars at least on cleaning.As one can see,the price of cigarettes is not the only cost to smokers;the additional cleaning expense associated with smoking makes it an expensive habit to take on.
從以上寫作范例,很明顯essay寫法有別于中文,這就是為什么不建議先寫中文,再翻成英文,兩者寫作結(jié)構(gòu)的差異,不是文法、句型、或用字可以取代。需要Essay代寫服務(wù)的同學(xué)掃描右邊的二維碼聯(lián)系我們的客服哦!